The highest tree in the camp

   The highest tree in the camp
Arriving at the tree, I felt very scared, shivering in the cold.  It was so cold that I couldn't even move. Shivering, I feel like I'm falling down the ladder. When I went the second time I was so eager to get to the top. I am as numb as I can possibly get. Getting soaked with rain as I go up, my mouth gets drier and drier as I get closer and closer to the top. I wanted to get down but people down below said “You can go higher!” So I said to myself I can do it but I was not comfortable about the person holding the rope because he was not holding me properly. (When we were listening to Jesse, the instructor, she said that we can not make the rope like wobbly spaghetti.) It was time to go. I was very impressed with what I had done today and I was also impressed with Rosa too because she said that she wanted to stop, but then my friends and I  said to try and go high. And she did. She got to the top.

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My reflection 

In this piece of writing I was learning  to show emotions and appeal to senses.
When I learnt how to do it, it was quite challenging, but then when I got how to do it ,it was getting easy. It went well because I now know how to show emotion in different ways. For a example: my mouth was getting drier and drier as I get closer and closer to the top. The emotion I trying to show was fear because I was so scared of falling.



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  1. Wow lila that blog post was really good and really quality work you are so lucky because you got to volunteer and was it fun! I love the picture but you do look a bit nervous once again it is really quality work and I love it and it is really good,Ruby πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œ❤️❤️❤️❤️πŸ‰πŸ‰πŸ‰πŸ‰

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  2. Wow Lila that story really hocked me in.It shows a lot of emotion, and you really appealed to the senses.It sounds like that tree was really really really high.I really love it how you said on the second time you were really eager to get to the top.And you really hocked me in bye saying at the start, Arriving at the tree, I felt scared, shivering in the cold.
    I love you writing leap the great work up Lila.

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